Proof reading.

DanniSometimes you get to the end of an assignment, ffffinally, and you can’t wait to see the back of it. Let’s be honest, the last thing you want to do is go back over and proof read it. But we’ve all gotta remember that this is the easiest way to improve your marks. You’ve put in all the hard work already; you’re pretty much just ripping yourself off if you don’t proof it. Feel free to give yourself a rest from it for a while first though (if you have the luxury of time and your assignment isn’t due in an hour).

There will be typos and grammatical errors that are confusing to read and distort your sentences, that make it hard for your lecturer to work out what you’re trying to say – you don’t really want to work them too hard when they’re reading and marking your assignment. You want them to be happy and smiling and glad.

I had an assignment the other day that I just couldn’t get started. I forced myself to get some words on the page and basically began brainstorming my response, in sentence form. Bad sentences. But I had made a start and got on a roll. When I finally came to proof read it, it was ugly. It was U-G-L-Y.

So I frowned a little bit first, then I printed it out and plodded along scribbling on it (and cussing on it) and reading sentences aloud. I reckon printing my assignments out, scribbling on and editing them is a pretty effective way of proofing and improving my work, cos it essentially provides two proofing opportunities. First when I’m going to town scribbling on it and then again when I’m inputting my changes onto my word doc.

Reading your work out-aloud is really great for picking up grammatical errors, especially if you have a pal available to listen and give you some pointers 😉 For particularly difficult, fluffy, confusing sentences I speak aloud and pretend to explain to someone what I’m actually trying to say, what I meant by the sentence. This usually gives me some clues as to how I could structure my sentence to get my message across a bit more efficiently.

Another way to have your work read aloud is to use the program WYNN, that’s on all the Uni computers. This program is pretty nifty. It reads and highlights the text from documents you upload (or even webpages) so you can then listen and pick up any errors or areas for improvement. You can also type straight into this program and it will predict the next word of your sentence (sort of like Android predictive text on a mobile), this can be handy for reducing grammatical errors in expression, especially for international students.

Anyway, they’re the methods I used to proof read this particularly bad assignment I had written. I got through it and was pretty glad for it to be over once I’d finally finished. I definitely knew though that the work I submitted was MUCH better than if I had have neglected the proofing/editing process and felt much happier with the result. Smile.

So from me to you, do yourself a solid and proof read ya work.

P.S. I ended up getting 34/35 for this assignment… Wow, proof reading huh. What magic.

~Danielle

FOLLOW THE MARKING GUIDE!!!

SharelleComing fresh from high school to uni I’ve had to adapt to what university like to call ‘adult learning’. You don’t have your teacher there constantly reminding you of that upcoming assignment or online quiz, its up to you as ‘adults’ to read the course descriptor and figure it our for yourself.

Academic writing has a completely different meaning compared to what it did in high school. We have to think critically, comprehensively research our topic, and reference accordingly. However, the one thing many newbies forget, and even sometimes myself, is to READ THE MARKING GUIDE. When it comes to writing an essay cling to your marking guide and use it as your bible! Making sure you address each criteria, and have a look at what each criteria is worth.

Once you’ve written your essay and addressed all the areas on the study guide try marking your own assignment, and use it to reflect on any improvements that could be made to your work- this works for me anyways! I find it very helpful and often reflects the grade I end up getting 🙂

~Sharelle

 

Essay Structure

RyanYou know what’s fun? Essay structure.

Said no-one ever.

Essay structure is something that seems like it should be easy but isn’t. At all. It lulls you into a false sense of security with the fond high-school memories of TEEL and then smacks you around when your back is turned. There’s no one trick to nailing essay structure, but I’ll try and give you a basic breakdown. As in an explanation. I’m sure we’re all experiencing enough of the other kind of breakdown over the semester.

To start with, you need to make sure your essay holds a clear introduction, body and conclusion. The introduction and conclusion are typically one paragraph, while the body refers to the majority of the content. It’s worth stating that it will be really hard to write these if you don’t have a really clear idea of what you’re writing on, so make sure you understand the question and have a rough idea of your response.

The introduction, surprisingly, introduces the reader to the topic. It should start with a broad overview of the field and then narrow down until it explicitly states what the essay is dealing with. This should culminate in what we call a ‘thesis statement’. The thesis statement is a sentence or two that says exactly what you’re trying to do in this essay and it should be the last sentence of your introduction. The key with the introduction is to start broad and narrow down. But don’t go so broad that you lose all relevance. If your topic has to do with the development of the communist movement then you don’t have to go back to the Triassic period. After the introduction, your readers should know exactly what to expect from your essay. Nothing should surprise them. This is an academic paper not an M. Night Shyamalan movie.

The body paragraphs are the meat of your essay. This is where it all happens. Your readers have been introduced to what you’re going to do and now you’re going to do it. Each paragraph should be a topic of its own. Don’t try to deal with more than one major point at once. This is where planning comes in handy. Think about what the key points are that you want to address and devote a paragraph to each of them. Within the body paragraphs themselves, you want to start off by introducing your paragraph topic, then discussing the topic, then closing it off and leading into the next paragraph topic.

The conclusion is essentially the opposite of the introduction. Start narrow and broaden out. You typically want to start by restating your thesis statement and then look at the broader implications or the wider scope. You should not introduce any new information in the conclusion. This should be a summary of what has occurred and that is all.

A super easy way to think of the three sections is this:

     Introduction: Tell them what you’re going to do

     Body: Do it

     Conclusion: Tell them what you did

Hopefully that helps you folks somewhat. Remember, if you’re really struggling with essay structure you can contact the ASK service at ask.sal@federation.edu.au

Have fun and try not to stress!

Ryan

Oral Presentations

DanniOral pressies, I have some hot tips.

First of all, less is more on your slides. Don’t chuck all your information onto your PowerPoint, cos your class pals will be distracted by your busy slides and you won’t have anything else new to say during your presentation… Give yourself some brief points to guide you, a few, relevant pics and then chat and expand on each of the points. Way more interesting and relatable. Great.

Number two, don’t freak out. You don’t care when someone else mucks up. So before you do yours, take a deep breath (actually do it) and think about how these kids are just the same as you (actually do this too). You chat to them all the time during class anyway, so what’s the big deal? It’s fine. Not even a problem.

Slow down! Pause between slides or between each point for a couple of seconds; you’ll be surprised how much this calms you down and composes you. Easy. Also if you do happen to stumble on your words or muck up, just keep going. Pause and compose yourself if you need to, but always keep going.

For more tips, check out our very own Grant Meredith giving a presentation about public speaking https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qzXuHPYx1D4

~Danni

Library Videos

IMG_0585“How the heck do I reference in APA/Chicago/MLA style?” Honestly, I swear that writing/formatting your work properly in all the different styles is one of the most common problems that ALL students have. Not just first years, even students in their fourth years go and double/triple check their work just to make sure they actually formatted it right. I know I certainly still need to check twice before submitting.

What all these people -don’t- know, is that the university’s library has actually uploaded a bunch of stuff online to help with all kinds of academic problems. Don’t know how to reference your journal article in MLA? The library has the answer. Not sure how to make subheading in APA style? The library has the answer.

If you go to the Federation University website, and click the little ‘Library’ tab up the top, all kinds of useful stuff gets thrown at you. If you look on the left, you’ll see some tabs like ‘assignment and research help’, and ‘course-related resources’. If you’re having trouble referencing, go to course-related resources and click on ‘general guide for the presentation of academic work’. If you’re having trouble actually finding resources to reference, go to ‘assignment and research help’ and check out the ‘library skills classes’ that the library runs!

If there’s anything you can’t find or aren’t quite sure of, go and ask the librarian! I know some people have a hard time asking questions to people they don’t know, but don’t underestimate librarians, they get bored just like everyone else and will often leap at the chance to use their knowledge to help a student with an honest question!

The two morals of this story are 1; the university library site has good stuff on it, and 2; librarians are super smart and often really nice, treat them with respect and use them as the fantastic resource that they are!

Have fun!

~Brodie.

24 hour labs

Glenn_6Four thirty on a Sunday afternoon, six hours into a marathon study session and I realize that I didn’t complete all of the statistics I needed for the analysis! Not a problem really, I could do it Monday, but I’m on a roll! I just want it done. Unfortunately to do a stats analysis I need access to SPSS software which is only available to me at Uni. Sigh! Then it occurred to me that the Uni is supposed to have 24 hour computer labs. So I jump online to the UB website and type  ’24 hour computer labs’ into the search function. After clicking on the top response I scroll down the page and viola! There they are, four of them plus another one in the old library at the camp st campus. Rooms T146-T149. Okay so I know the T building but those rooms don’t sound familiar. Into the car and I arrive at an EMPTY car park. Never thought I’d ever see that! T146 has an external door. Walking up from the car park and down to the end of the staff parking outside T building and you can just see the number on the door. Student card in hand, swipe in and there are the computers just waiting to do some stats. All too easy.

Now back to my assignment, Cheers!

~Glenn

Note making

Aodhan1Note making is a fundamental skill that students’ need to master in order to be successful at University. There are various ways of making notes which include linear note making, concept mapping, matrices and clustering. The style that you choose to use when you take notes in dependent on your preferred style.  I have listed some strategies and advice that you can use for your own studies regarding note taking.

 

Some useful tips.

  • Experiment with a range of note making techniques until you find a strategy that works for you.
  • Use a style of note making that suits your own learning style. For example visual learners prefer colour coded mind maps in favour of linear note making.
  • Use highlighters to mark important information. For example highlight key words and phrases. NOT entire paragraphs.
  • Effective note making occurs when you convert the notes you have taken in a lecture and structure them in a form e.g. matrix that suits your learning style. This strategy helps to consolidate the information you have learnt.
  • Use sticky notes for the resources you can read and refer to.
  • Use a tape recorder for your lecture and make notes when you listen to the recording. Ensure you seek the permission of the lecturer before you do this.
  • When viewing online journals use the find search option to determine if the source contains any relevant information for your assignment.

 

Useful links for note making.

http://www.monash.edu.au/lls/llonline/reading/taking-notes/index.xml

https://student.unsw.edu.au/note-taking-skills

http://www.newcastle.edu.au/service/library/tutorials/infoskills/writing/page11.html

http://federation.edu.au/students/assistance-support-and-services/academic-support/learning-and-study

~Aodhan